Absence of character
One good concern to think about is: could someone else have actually written this essay? Then you aren’t doing a good job of representing your unique perspective on the world if the answer is yes. It is essential to show your capability to be always a step-by-step observer for the globe, since which is one of the primary jobs as being a scholar.
- Avoiding any feelings, and showing up robot-like and cool when you look at the essay. [···]